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Re: The Uprising
Deaven: He found this questionnaire fun... Compared to his normal activity of sleeping and looking in the distance. "Galea," he said. "Yes." Deaven sighed. "If we ever get a chance, ...
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Re: Royal Reviews
Please review these: The mansion chapter 1 The mansion chapter 2 other fiction. I must make them perfect. They are my babies. :) Could you be so kind and review ...
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Re: Wolf's critiques
Please review these: This shouldn't be prologue
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Re: You Know You Want Some [re-opened]
Please review these: The ripper prologue Pliide :D
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Re: Dragon Riders
Maradomin: He saw as Cliares turned invisible. Oh this was just great. "Vanis Guard the door!" He shouted. "Now girl. I know I can't see a shadow but you forget. ...
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Re: Are cliches a bad thing?
Hey do not diss cliche evil names. My evil master is called Darkness (in one of my books.) and one of his generals is named the great magnificent one (or ...
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Re: The Uprising
Deaven: He looked at Galea. He sighed. "They are the ´exotic`slaves. Slaves that aren't human." "I see," Galea answered. Deaven looked at her intensly, he noticed a thing that he ...
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Re: Uprising Discussion
I will post soon... Or now a conversation between mine and Dreamer's character. And maybe one of the love slaves. But I'm not totally sure if Shirin is with Deaven ...
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Re: Uprising Discussion
About my short post(s)... :oops: Sorry about that, and thanks for the notice, appreciate it. But Jiggity, I would also appreciate it if you eased up your messages, you could ...
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Re: The Uprising
Deaven: He was happy. Euphoric almost. Until the ship lurched and he woke up from the daydream. The storm was giving out it's last breathes.
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Re: Are cliches a bad thing?
Are cliches a bad thing? Are they bad in a book? I myself don't think so. Some of my jokes in my books have been remarked this way: "It is ...
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Re: Fantasy debate J.R.R Tolkien
No one every said he invented the idea of elves - it's well known that he borrowed many of his concepts from mythology - he just made the sort of ...
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Re: The Uprising
Deaven: He had just woke up in time to see, what had happened. He laughed, deliberately, so loud that all heads turned to him. He looked at Machavell "Ha!" He ...
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Re: The Uprising
Deaven: The storm had continued for a while. Sleeping. But not peacefully. He was having a nightmare. "Danny. What did you do?" Deaven cried out in shock. He was in ...
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Re: Fantasy debate J.R.R Tolkien
Okay, I was surfing the web just now. As I like to do back up research on web... about fantasy.. and look what I found: Modern fantasy Main article: Elves ...
Dec 1, 2008
